Professor, William Doane
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Reviewed by: William Doane, 24 Jun 09 2:47 PM MST
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Very well done... your business plan has a nice, professional feel. Note that on your website "Service's" only has an ' when it's possessive. Congratulations!! [Final]
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Reviewed by: William Doane 13 May 09 8:52 PM MST
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The VC document is fantastic... I have some concerns about the financial statements, which I've highlighted in the attached document. some of the numbers don't seem quite right, so I'd appreciate it if you could clarify the issues I highlighted.
[Project 4]
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Reviewed by: William Doane 12 Jun 09 11:14 AM MST
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Again, very good work! You've obviously given some serious thought to the information architecture needs of your site. Your work is a pleasure to see.
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Reviewed by: William Doane 20 Jun 09 11:35 PM MST
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This looks good, Sharon. I wonder, since this document is intended only for business partners, lenders, etc, whether you could suggest your price range/project scale? -Wil